FICTION on the WEB - I Am Your Brother by Charlie Fish

Comments on I Am Your Brother by Charlie Fish

Very well structured story, beautifully written; makes you read it so fast to see what happened in the end and then the end comes and... it is all a bit surreal... I will be thinking of it for a while! When is the follow up?
No I disagree! you must leave it like this. Its absolutelydelightful. I love the ending. Its and idea, an odd day, it catchesyou and makes you think. It doesn't need anything more.
A great story and easy to read and to follow. Enjoyed your storyline it is thought provoking all the way to the end. Thank you for sharing. P Addo
A great story as far as it goes, but it doesn't go far enough--just enough to whet the reader's appetite. It's a fascinating story that grabbed me and held me from start to finish. I think there's a great storyline there that begs for more.
I must stop reading your stories, they have this way of making me think too much. Next time you have a dream like this though, how about putting it on video instead?
"I Am Your Brother", an enjoyable piece with an ending that would befit my personal life - "Heck... what next...!"
It walks up to you, slaps you in the face, fails to explain why, then walks away. I liked it.
This is a very beautiful work
Please keep working on this. I'm not sure where you'll take it, but I'd like to see!
It is interesting and original, but lacked a satisifying ending.
Great story. You could even leave it as is if you wanted, BUT YOU CAN'T. You definitely should continue this. When you do, let me know, because I definitely want to read the rest of this story.
I wasn't unsettled but that doesn't mean it wasn't a good story though, because I thought it definitely was.
This was a really cool premise and I'd like to see it further developed. You have created an interesting premise for this tale. I really like it! I think it has excellent potential and you are a good writer! Final thought, go for it all the way. Unless you just don't have time to develop it, make it a novel. This would make an excellent movie, a real thriller with twists.
I enjoyed this. I really did. And if you expand on this, like I think you should, I'd read it.
Author's comment: I think this was a dream I had that lingered in my mind. It seemed impossible to write a short story about it, so I thought I'd give it a try...

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